Pretty Good.
This is a pretty nice submission. The only problem I don't really think it's trance. It may have some trance elements but it might have been better in some other category. It seems like a mix of maybe Drum & Bass and House or something...I don't know.
I think it's pretty good though. Keep it Up and check out some of my music!
kmg
Thanks, im not that good on judging what genres they are.
I'll be sure to check your stuff out soon.
Very Interesting.
Personally this reminded me a bit of dimrain47's work but with that said this would have better fit into the Techno section. But what the hell you can only submit once so what are you gonna do. So here are the details. I think it's got alot of potential but I really don't like the beat. I'm more for a classic kick kick kick kick. I just think it was too rapid.
kmg
ps. hit up some of my work!
Ty For The ReView Ill be Sure To Check Your Stuff Out And Yeah About That Beat .... xD lol I was Deciding To Just Make it Simple With the Kick Kick kick Like u said But this came up and i coudnt decided so i asked my sister wich one and well she chose this one lol if i was for better or for worse i unno ...
Overkill...
What I mean by "overkill" is that this track had alot of nice features but it was a bit over the top in my opinion. I'm sure many people would jump out of their seats listening to the awesome synths you used (I really do think they were awesome) but when they were combined with the soft piano it seemed a little too much. This could have been pulled off a little better if you had used a bit softer synths but in your case they were a bit too "ravish" to be arranged on top of piano leads. Don't get me wrong...I am by no means saying that I don't like "ravish" synths...because I love a good hard rave beat but when compared to piano it seemed to clash a beat. Especially because you overlayed it all as a whole with dj vocal samples and stuff. This track minus the piano may not have been as mood-filled but would have definitely been a great high energy song that I would have liked much more.
Just remember some tracks can be very simple and beat out those that are insanely complex.
kmg
keep experimenting and you'll get the results you want.
4/5
Hmm..very good points! It was a big risk to put the piano on top of the hi-energy synths. I was trying to go for a kind of ATB flavour, but you're quite right...the synths are a bit hard for that to be pulled off with any chance of success..
Thanks for the review man, hopefully the next one will be better.
Serious Potential
This is a very good song and it was well arranged but it could be soooo much better. What I'm saying is...if you were to beef up those synths and percs with reeverb and possibly a tad of delay and maybe compress a few things like your kicks and bassline synths so that they pounded really nice...this could be a way better track. You've obviously got talent in writing melodies and arranging things. You just need to work a little bit more on your tech skills to complement the talent you have already poored into this song.
One thing I will give you though is...it was very trancy.
Keep it up.
kmg
Thank you for the criticism, I appreciate it. I will definitely take your advice to heart. There are many things I need help with.
Finally Something Worthy...
of being labeled Trance. I was looking through the top Trance submissions and I finally got to this after downvoting others that were not up to cut and I loved it. To be a trance song the song must atleast partially make you feel like your in a trance or make you happy. This definitely satisfied my needs when it comes to that. Not to mention the song flowed very nicely. I only gave you 8 on Originality simply because it was a remix. I've never heard the original but if it's anything like this...I like it.
kmg
ps. keep up the awesome work. this kind of music can make an impact on the quality of submissions around here.
thank you very much for this great review!
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Good I guess but...
even though it was supposed to be a remix...it's not really advised that you actually use the same synths as from the original track. Originality is a definite factor in the world of Electronica. To me this was less 'remixed' and more 're-arranged'.
ps. I really didn't think this should have been submitted as Trance either. In my opinion even the original track isn't trance. It's more ambient.
Yea It was my first Audio i made, So i wasnt 100% sure on what i was doing I am for a Trance kinda beat , but i figure i give it a shot anyways, thanks for the feedback too :) Im hoping soon i will have some much better songs posted up that are much better and more tuned for trance :P
Very Nice and Moving!
I really liked this piece. The piano melodies were very emotional and I like that alot in songs like this. It really made me think about messages this song could be trying to convey. I would suggest next time putting a piece like this in the Classical section though. Also, there were tad bits of distortion like a bit of fuzziness on a few of the times when both the low and lower chords hit while the higher melody kept playing. There were also few areas where I would have liked to hear more of the violin or cello pads you had in some spots.
Really good work though. I enjoyed this piece very much.
kmg
Awesome
Sweet song! Great builds well actually they were awesome builds. Good synths too. Only one suggestion...pump some massive reeverb into those vocals because they sound way too dry to me for trance.
kmg
Great Song
Good solid song, nice melodies, and everything runs together really nice. Keep up the good work, I enjoyed it the whole time and did not get bored...consider yourself a genious... ;)
kmg
Pretty Awesome but...
Really nice track you've got here, I really like the synths you used and the kicks...oh yes the kicks are awesome...you mind informing me on how to get my kicks to sound like that? Anyways, the only flaw I found in the song was that (in my opinion) it took to long to get to the full chorus and after the 4th time the main lead faded in and out I was getting tired of it...I think if it had maybe done it once and then blasted in after a build that would have been better. Either way it's a sweet track...keep up the good work.
kmg
ps. Seriously, tell me how to get my kicks to sound like that please.
FL Compressor > "Drums" preset.
Eq it like fuck, turn down the master channel, and the main volume of FL, to get everything coming through smoothly!
Hope this works for you?
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